To kate (homework)

2018-11-02 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

학생이 쓴 원문

I have no special plans for November. But I always prepare for winter around this time of year. The first thing to prepare is fire woods for the fireplace in the living room. My family like sitting and talking in front of the fireplace on winter holidays. However, winter in Jeju island is not as cold as in Seoul, so it is really good to live there.

강사 첨삭

Hello Michael!

Happy Friday! It\'s the end of the week and I hope you are not as busy as the previous days anymore. I appreciate the fact that you always finish your homework on time. The composition today was very well-written and with almost no mistakes. Good job! I\'m looking forward to reading more of your meaningful compositions in the future.^^

~~Teacher Kate


1. I have no special plans for November. 

>>>CORRECT!

OR>>> I haven\'t planned special for November
2. But, I always prepare for winter around this time of year.

>>>CORRECT!

OR>>> Around this time of year, though, we always begin our preparations for the coming winter.
3. The first thing to prepare is firewoods for the fireplace in the living room. 

>>>CORRECT!

OR>>>On top of the list of things to prepare is firewood for the fireplace in the living room.
4. My family like sitting and talking in front of the fireplace on winter holidays. 

>>>My family likes sitting and talking in front of the fireplace on winter holidays. 
5. However, winter in Jeju island is not as cold as in Seoul, so it is really good to live there.

>>>CORRECT!

OR>>Winters in Jeju island tend to be less harsh than winters in Seoul, so it is really good to live there.

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