To. Kelly

2012-06-21 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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Please question to me as follows :) Were you involved in any extracurricular activities? Tell me about your part-time job experiences. Of the positions you have held, which did you have trouble with? Why? Describe a time when you were working on a team project and you had to motivate your teammates to accomplish their tasks. What was the situation? What role did you play? What was the outcome? Tell me about a time when you had to meet multiple deadlines. What was the situation? What did you do? How did you handle this situation and what was the result? Tell me about a time when you make an impressive to somebody. What was the situation? How did you make an impressive? -end- Good bye

강사 첨삭

I\'m looking forward to hearing your answers to these questions. It looks very interesting. I hope you wouldn\'t write down your answers so that you\'ll be able to freely give your answers. I was so impressed with your word usage in our class a while ago. See you tomorrow! T. Kelly Were you involved in any extracurricular activities? >>Correct!Tell me about your part-time job experiences.>>Correct!Of the positions you have held, which did you have trouble with? Why?>>Correct!Describe a time when you were working on a team project and you had to motivate your teammates to accomplish their tasks. >>Correct!  What was the situation? What role did you play? What was the outcome?>>Correct!Tell me about a time when you had to meet multiple deadlines. What was the situation? What did you do? How did you handle this situation and what was the result?>>Correct!Tell me about a time when you make an impressive to somebody. >>Tell me about a time when you impressed somebody. What was the situation? >>Correct! How did you make an impressive?>>How did you make an impression? -end-Good bye >>Correct!

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