To. Kelly
학생이 쓴 원문
Please ask me the following questions on Tuseday :^)
-Tell me about your travel experience.
-What is your ideal job?
-Tell me about a time you showed leadership.
-why do you think people have hobbies?
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A year ago I had to create web site for my major course and I had to make UCC for my club activity . Their deadlines were same time. I thought deeply how to work effectively. I determined that I get up earlier than usual to make UCC in the morning. Although I was very tired, I could focus on creating website in the afternoon, or evening. Finally I got great score for creating web site, I also received free ticket to enter soccer stadium for my UCC. Most of all It was possible due to my diligent attitude -end-
강사 첨삭
Hello there! Thank you for preparing another set of questions. I can\'t wait to hear your answers again. Just be confident always. I know that you are always dedicated with your craft. See you in class tomorrow!
_T. Kelly_
Please ask me the following questions on Tuseday :^)
>> Correct!***Tuesday
-Tell me about your travel experience.>> Correct!-What is your ideal job?>> Correct!-Tell me about a time you showed leadership.
>> Correct!>>> OR: tell me about a time you showed your leadership skill.-why do you think people have hobbies?>> Correct!---------------------------------------------end------A year ago I had to create web site for my major course and I had to make UCC for my club activity .
>> A year ago I had to create web site for my major and I had to make UCC for my club activity .
Their deadlines were same time.
>> The deadline for both project was on the same date.
I thought deeply how to work effectively.
>> Correct!
I determined that I get up earlier than usual to make UCC in the morning.
>> I was very determined so I get up earlier than usual to finish UCC in the morning.
Although I was very tired, I could focus on creating website in the afternoon, or evening.
>> Although I was very tired I could still focus on the website that I was creating, whether it\'s in the afternoon or evening.
Finally I got great score for creating web site, I also received free ticket to enter soccer stadium for my UCC.
>> Finally, I got a great score for creating the website. I also received a free ticket for a soccer game for my UCC.
Most of all It was possible due to my diligent attitude -end-
>> Everything is possible especially if you are diligent.
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