To. Kelly

2012-06-25 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Please ask me the following questions on Tuseday :^) -Tell me about your travel experience. -What is your ideal job? -Tell me about a time you showed leadership. -why do you think people have hobbies? ---------------------------------------------end------ A year ago I had to create web site for my major course and I had to make UCC for my club activity . Their deadlines were same time. I thought deeply how to work effectively. I determined that I get up earlier than usual to make UCC in the morning. Although I was very tired, I could focus on creating website in the afternoon, or evening. Finally I got great score for creating web site, I also received free ticket to enter soccer stadium for my UCC. Most of all It was possible due to my diligent attitude -end-

강사 첨삭

Hello there! Thank you for preparing another set of questions. I can\'t wait to hear your answers again. Just be confident always. I know that you are always dedicated with your craft. See you in class tomorrow! _T. Kelly_ Please ask me the following questions on Tuseday :^) >> Correct!***Tuesday -Tell me about your travel experience.>> Correct!-What is your ideal job?>> Correct!-Tell me about a time you showed leadership. >> Correct!>>> OR: tell me about a time you showed your leadership skill.-why do you think people have hobbies?>> Correct!---------------------------------------------end------A year ago I had to create web site for my major course and I had to make UCC for my club activity . >> A year ago I had to create web site for my major and I had to make UCC for my club activity . Their deadlines were same time. >> The deadline for both project was on the same date. I thought deeply how to work effectively. >> Correct! I determined that I get up earlier than usual to make UCC in the morning. >> I was very determined so I get up earlier than usual to finish UCC in the morning. Although I was very tired, I could focus on creating website in the afternoon, or evening. >> Although I was very tired I could still focus on the website that I was creating, whether it\'s in the afternoon or evening.  Finally I got great score for creating web site, I also received free ticket to enter soccer stadium for my UCC. >> Finally, I got a great score for creating the website. I also received a free ticket for a soccer game for my UCC.  Most of all It was possible due to my diligent attitude -end- >> Everything is possible especially if  you are diligent.

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