To : Kelly (My great teacher)
학생이 쓴 원문
Please ask me the following questions on Thursday
- What is your commitment to this job?
- Are you a team player?
- How do you propose to compensate for your lack of experience?
- Do you think you are overqualified for this position?
- Describe a situation in which you had to work with a difficult person (another student, co-worker,supervisor, etc.). How did you handle the situation?
☆★☆★☆★☆★☆One of the my answers★☆★☆★☆★☆★☆
Last year, I wanted to get prize for my outdoor activity. I was member of young standard chartered which was student ambassador for the Standard Chartered Bank. Always I was dedicated to making contents such as ucc, catalog. Finally, I got best-student-ambassdor prize by president of this bank. I also got opportunity to work this company as internship.
Thank you :)
강사 첨삭
Hello there! Thank you for your composition today. Your job interview is getting nearer. But I\'m very confident that you will impress the interviewer because you are really good. Anyway, have a good day and I\'ll see you again tomorrow.
_Teacher Kelly_
Please ask me the following questions on Thursday>> Correct!- What is your commitment to this job?>> Correct!- Are you a team player?>> Correct!- How do you propose to compensate for your lack of experience?>> How do you compensate for your lack of experience?- Do you think you are overqualified for this position?>> Correct!- Describe a situation in which you had to work with a difficult person (another student, co-worker,supervisor, etc.). How did you handle the situation? >> Correct!☆★☆★☆★☆★☆One of the my answers★☆★☆★☆★☆★☆Last year, I wanted to get prize for my outdoor activity.
>> Correct!
I was member of young standard chartered which was student ambassador for the Standard Chartered Bank.
>> I was a member of young standard charter and I became a student ambassador for the Standard Chartered Bank.
Always I was dedicated to making contents such as ucc, catalog.
>> I am always dedicated in making UCC catalogs.
Finally, I got best-student-ambassdor prize by president of this bank.
>> Finally, I got the best student ambassador award from the president of this bank.
I also got opportunity to work this company as internship.
>> I also had the opportunity to work as intern in this company.
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