To Kristel
학생이 쓴 원문
Teacher! ;)
I loved your joke today. I was embarrassed.
I knew you are funny! So, I like you more than yesterday.
I want to talk fluently with you, but my pronunciation and grammer is not good...lol. So, I am sad, but I practice more :D
And, I want you listen the song '꿈에', which means 'In Dream.'
Good night! My teacher!
강사 첨삭
Hello again [이름]!
Thank you for writing this composition! Thank you for liking me more. I really appreciate it! I really hope that you'll continue studying English so that you'll get better and maybe when we meet each other in the future, you'll be able to say all the things that you want to say! J I'll miss you my [이름]!
-Teacher Kristel-
Teacher! ;)I loved your joke today. I was embarrassed.
>> CorrectI knew you are funny!
>> Correct
So, I like you more than yesterday.>> Correct I want to talk fluently with you, but my pronunciation and grammer is not good...lol.
>> I want to talk fluently with you but my pronunciation and grammar are not that good.
So, I am sad, but I practice more :D >> So, I am sad but I will practice more.And, I want you listen the song '꿈에', which means 'In Dream.'>> CorrectGood night! My teacher!
>> Goodnight, my teacher!
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