To learn another language
학생이 쓴 원문
If I learn another language It will be Spanish. because there are many people use it in South America. That means I can travel most part of South America espceially I would like to go there and see the Inca remains. And I know thire beef is so nice I hope to taste it.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Thomas!
Como esta? Well, this means \"how are you?\" in Spanish. I am sure you are doing excellent since you sent me two homework answers today. That is hard work and diligence and I thank you for that.
There are 548.3 million Spanish speakers in the world and you will enjoy speaking this in South America as well as other parts of Europe. I must say, it is a good choice of language.
Your sentences are good combinations of vocabulary and good grammar. Go over my suggestions and read them carefully. Great job!
Thanks again and see you next week!
-T. Donna~
>> Correct!
Or: If I learn another language, it will be Spanish.
because there are many people use it in South America.
>> Because there are many people who use it in South America.
That means I can travel most part of South America espceially I would like to go there and see the Inca remains.
>> That means I can travel most parts of South America especially, I would like to go there and see the Inca remains.
And I know thire beef is so nice I hope to taste it.
>> Correct!
Or: And I know that their beef is so nice, I hope to taste it.
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