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2010-10-29 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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Good evening, liam ... :) I see my self as a flight attendant in your company. Five years from now I'll be efficent and affective flight attendant in your airline. I realized need hard work, being energetic , experienced. I will commit my self to making sure on a daily basis. I believe jist service oriented and work hard. have a nice weekend~~~~`

강사 첨삭

Hello there!Im really glad to hear that you are pursuing your dream and doing such thing is a great thing for you to do!I commend you for a job well done..;0)

T.Lynn

Good evening, liam ... :)
>>correct!
I see my self as a flight attendant in your company.
>>correct!
Five years from now I'll be efficent and affective flight attendant in your airline.
>>Five years from now I'll be efficient and affective flight attendant in your airline.
I realized need hard work, being energetic , experienced.
>>It is necessary for me to have experience, be harworking and energetic
I will commit my self to making sure on a daily basis.
>>correct!
I believe jist service oriented and work hard.
>>I just believe in working hard and being a service oriented person
have a nice weekend~~~~`

>> You do the same. 

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