To lose a friend, start sharing a flat with him/her.
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Hello [이름]. Thank you for this. People are indeed different and that causes the conflict.
- T. Beth
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I agree with the idea of “to lose a friend you need to start sharing a flat with
him/her”.
>>> correct
There are many people around me, who started to live with their friends to split
high rent fee.
>>> There are many people around me who started to live with their friends to split the high rent fee.
Before they living with their own friends, the relationship between two is not that
bad, but after few months later, they seems to have some problems while sharing
house together.
>>> Before living with their own friends, the relationship between the two was not that bad, but after few months, they seem to have some problems while sharing house together.
>>> OR: Before living with their own friends, the relationship between the two was not that bad, but few months later, they seem to have some problems with sharing the house together.
Friends who decided to live together usually in close relationship, so they might
think that we are having this kind of deep friendship and we might don’t make
any problem while living in a single house.
>>> Friends who decided to live together are usually in a close relationship, so they might think that we are having this kind of deep friendship and we might not make any problem while living in a single house.
But I think the way of living, known as “life-style” is so different from each other
so this can make the crack of friendship.
>>> But I think the way of living, known as “life-style”, is so different from each other so this can make the crack in their friendship.
It’s differ to every single person in detail, like some people prefer to clean up the
house once a week, while others like to clean up everyday and it’s also can
divided in various ways by person.
>>> It differs for every single person in detail. Some people prefer to clean up the house once a week, while others like to clean up everyday and it also can be divided in various ways by the person.
Even the way use toilet is different because each person grew up in completely
different home environment.
>>> Even the way they use the toilet is different because each person grew up in a completely different home environment.
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