To Lynn

2016-07-19 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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Good morning Lynn. i'm sorry for miss the class. When I woke up, it was 7 in the morning. --------------------------------------------------------- I'm asking you to correct below sentence. Dear Customer Complaint Hub, Thank you for sending me your opinion. But, 6 damage products were not damaged during transportation. We believed the products were damaged during the packing. When we opened the box, there was no product’s cap. MKL wants manufacturer’s answers of this complaint. Would you please check again and forward an Investigation report?

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름],

It\'s okay. I understand. I hope today won\'t be so tiring for you at work so I will get to see you tomorrow. Have a nice day. See you!

Take care!

~T. Lynn

 

Good morning Lynn,

>>correct!
i\'m sorry for miss the class.

>>I\'m sorry for missing the class today.
When I woke up, it was 7 in the morning.

>>correct!
---------------------------------------------------------
I\'m asking you to correct below sentence.
>>I\'m asking you to correct the sentences below.

OR>> Please correct the sentences below.


Dear Customer Complaint Hub,

>>correct!
Thank you for sending me your opinion.

>>correct!
But, 6 damage products were not damaged during transportation.
We believed the products were damaged during the packing.

>>But the 6 damaged products were not damaged during the transportation. We believe the products were damaged during the packing.

When we opened the box, there was no product’s cap. MKL wants manufacturer’s answers of this complaint.

>>When we opened the box, the product was not sealed. MKL wants the manufacturer\'s answer to this complaint.

Would you please check again and forward an Investigation report?

>>correct!

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