To Ms.Ella
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
THE boy [이름]^^
Wow! You are the first student who has ever written me a compisition. :) I also enjoyed talking to you [이름]! You are very funny and easy to talk with. I'm looking forward for tomorrow's classJ
Here are my corrections for you^^:
Hi this is [이름],boy.
>>CORRECT
Today class was fun.
>>Today's class was fun.
I want to study like this.
>>CORRECT
Main idea 'Whatever'.
>>The main idea / topic is Whatever?
I like to talk whatever.
>>I like talking about anything. ->> BETTER
I wish to go to your house.
>>CORRECT
**hehehe. Give me a call when you go to the Philippines and I will give you a tour at our house.
It will be cool ,because I like to play with dogs.
>>CORRECT
Today I had a fun class thank you. bye ^.^
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**Me too. I had lots of fun J SEE YOU!!파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.