To Ms.Ella

2010-08-17 · 첨삭 강사 Jessica

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi this is [이름],boy. Today class was fun. I want to study like this. Main idea 'Whatever'. I like to talk whatever. I wish to go to your house. It will be cool ,because I like to play with dogs. Today I had a fun class thank you. bye ^.^

강사 첨삭

THE boy [이름]^^

Wow! You are the first student who has ever written me a compisition. :) I also enjoyed talking to you [이름]! You are very funny and easy to talk with. I'm looking forward for tomorrow's classJ

 Here are my corrections for you^^:

Hi this is [이름],boy.

>>CORRECT

Today class was fun.

>>Today's class was fun.

I want to study like this.

>>CORRECT

Main idea 'Whatever'.

>>The main idea / topic is Whatever?

I like to talk whatever.

>>I like talking about anything. ->> BETTER

I wish to go to your house.

>>CORRECT

**hehehe. Give me a call when you go to the Philippines and I will give you a tour at our house.

It will be cool ,because I like to play with dogs.

>>CORRECT

 Today I had a fun class thank you. bye ^.^

>>CORRECT

**Me too. I had lots of fun J SEE YOU!!

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