To My Jessica^^! hahaha!!

2010-12-09 · 첨삭 강사 Jessica

학생이 쓴 원문

You are plad(?) of me. I came home take a taxy just now. I hurried up in a breathless hurry. Because I wanted receive a call from you. Fortunately, I arrived at home in time so I am happy. After 12days, I will not have a problem anymore with my thesis. I expect that time^^~(Your typing helped me!!) Have you heard about Kim sung min? He used drugs. He is 37years old. He is actor and appered on TV famous entertain program. I read it from the newspaper. What is the supres???? ^^;;; apalozais???? I do understand them but I think they must not use drogs. There are a lot of ways to solve your problem? I have a question^^! When I don't know and I don't understand, how am I answer to you? I want some forms sentens of expression.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Mi [이름]!I really applaud you for being so patient in learning English. I am happy talking to you too. I like your energy and excitement everytime we have our class. Anyway, "supress" means to overcome something and aplogogize means asking for forgiveness. And if you do not understand my sentence for example, you may say.."I'm sorry, but can you please repeat your sentence" or "Could you please say it one more time?"  See you tomorrow, Mi [이름]! You are plad(?) of me. >>>You are proud of me?I came home take a taxy just now. >>>I just came home by taxi.I hurried up in a breathless hurry. >>>I hurriedly came home with a breathless feeling.Because I wanted receive a call from you. >>>Because I wanted to receive your call.Fortunately, I arrived at home in time so I am happy. >>>>Fortunately, I just arrived my home on time so I was so happy.After 12days, I will not have a problem anymore with my thesis. >>>>correct sentenceI expect that time^^~(Your typing helped me!!) >>>correct sentenceHave you heard about Kim sung min? >>>correct sentenceHe used drugs. >>>correct sentenceHe is 37years old. >>>correct sentenceHe is actor and appered on TV famous entertain program. >>>He is an actor and appears on a famous TV program.I read it from the newspaper. >>>correct sentenceWhat is the supres???? ^^;;; apalozais???? >>>What are the meanings of supress and apologize?I do understand them but I think they must not use drogs. >>>I do understand them but I think they must not use drugs.(be careful with your spelling)There are a lot of ways to solve your problem? >>>correct sentenceI have a question^^! >>>correct sentenceWhen I don't know and I don't understand, how am I answer to you? >>>Is it ok to answer you with I don't know?or I don't understand?How will answer you?I want some forms sentens of expression. >>>can you please teach me some expressions.

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