to my past self

2024-02-26 · 첨삭 강사 Ryka

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When I was a student, I thought that studying and entering the university were all of my life. So, l just studied and prepared for exams during my school life. I didn’t think about other things. of course, thanks to that focus, I could go to the university, but I later discovered that learning in school is just a small piece of our lives and it’s not necessarily useful for getting jobs. maybe, Professional skills are more useful. but there are so many professional skills that it’s too hard to pick just one. Ultimately, to pick it, I should know what I want to do for my life. So, if I could give advice to my past self, I would say to look around and find a job I really want and prepare for it.

강사 첨삭

Hey Iris! Thank you so much for sharing this experience. It\'s been really nice reading about your experiences and opinions. Keep it up!
~~Teacher Ryka^^


When I was a student, I thought that studying and entering the university were all of my life. 
>> When I was a student, I believed that studying and gaining admission to university were the sole focus of my life.

So, l just studied and prepared for exams during my school life.
>> Consequently, I dedicated all my time to studying and preparing for exams during my school years.

I didn’t think about other things. 
>> Other considerations never crossed my mind.

of course, thanks to that focus, I could go to the university, but I later discovered that learning in school is just a small piece of our lives and it’s not necessarily useful for getting jobs. 
>> While this focus did enable me to gain entry into university, I later realized that academic learning is only a small part of life, and it may not necessarily translate into job opportunities.

maybe, Professional skills are more useful. 
>> Perhaps professional skills are more advantageous in the job market.

but there are so many professional skills that it’s too hard to pick just one. 
>> However, with such a vast array of professional skills to choose from, it becomes challenging to select just one.

Ultimately, to pick it, I should know what I want to do for my life. 
>> Ultimately, the key lies in understanding one\'s long-term aspirations.

So, if I could give advice to my past self, I would say to look around and find a job I really want and prepare for it.
>> If I could offer advice to my younger self, I would encourage exploration and urge myself to identify a career path that truly resonates with my passions and interests.

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