To. my teacher!!!

2010-07-21 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi teacher~hehehe i'm really happy to meet you. i was surprised about you!!! Actually, i miss my philipines teachers and there's life. i had spent great time there. So, i always told my teachers "i want to go back there". But, it is little difficult to go back there. These days, i was little sad. At the moment, i met you!!! i'm really happy. Nice to meet you sincerely!!!!!!! i will wait for our class time. hehehehehe See you tomorrow, teacher~~^^ Good night^^*

강사 첨삭

Hi student! haha..:) It was so nice to meet you too.;) You were so down-to-earth and open. I'm glad that you're glad.:) I hope to keep you happy with our classes on the days to come.:) -Teacher JM Here are your corrections: Hi teacher~hehehe >>>Correcti'm really happy to meet you.  >>>Correcti was surprised about you!!!  >>>Correct Actually, i miss my philipines teachers and there's life.  >>>Correct i had spent great time there.  >>>Actually, i miss my Philippine teachers and the life there.  So, i always told my teachers "i want to go back there".  >>>i spent a great time there.  But, it is little difficult to go back there.  >>>So, i always told my teachers "i want to go back there".  These days, i was little sad.  >>>But, it is a little difficult to go back there.  At the moment, i met you!!!  >>>These days, i've been a little sad.  i'm really happy. Nice to meet you sincerely!!!!!!! >>>Correcti will wait for our class time. hehehehehe>>>CorrectSee you tomorrow, teacher~~^^ >>>Correct Good night^^* >>>Correct

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