To my teacher, Sally. ^^

2011-02-15 · 첨삭 강사 Sally

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I think that I've never study English hard. I study English only to pass some English examinations. So my English isn't in the relationship between people but only in the English test grade. Teacher Sally, You might have patience for My poor English speaking and hearing ability, right? ^^ In order to talk with you delightfully, I try to do my best in my own way. First of all, I read your feedback about daily class carefully and try to learn my missing expessions. and I study grammar with a book and online lecture, "Basic Grammar in Use", and memorize 20 basic conversation forms everyday. I expect that my effort like these impove my English ability steadily. Is possible?

강사 첨삭

Dear [이름] [이름],

Thank you so much for sending this article to me today. I am very happy that you are doing all your best to learn English. Your efforts will make you improve and don뭪 worry about me. I will listen to you very carefully and patiently so that I will be able to teach you well. Keep on studying Basic Grammar in Use. It is very simple to understand. Keep it up^^

Have a good day

To my teacher, Sally. ^^

>>Correct

I think that I've never study English hard.

>>I think that I necver study hard in English.

 I study English only to pass some English examinations. 

>>Correct.

>>I study english just to pass an English examination.
So my English isn't in the relationship between people but only in the English test grade. 

>>So, my relationship to English isn뭪 for communiating with people but to get a high score on an English test.
Teacher Sally, You might have patience for My poor English speaking and hearing ability, right? ^^

>>correct
In order to talk with you delightfully, I try to do my best in my own way.

correct 
First of all, I read your feedback about daily class carefully and try to learn my missing expessions.

>>First of all, I read your feedback about our daily class carefully and try to learn my missing expressions.
and I study grammar with a book and online lecture, "Basic Grammar in Use", and memorize 20 basic conversation forms everyday.

>>I study grammar by reading a book and stuying with an on line lecture, 밄asic Grammar in Use

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