To prefer to be a leader than a follower
학생이 쓴 원문
I would like to be a leader. I actually moved to my job to be the leader. I had worked for the top company in the same field. Even though I chose current company for achieving my goal.
강사 첨삭
Thomas!
They said that a good leader is a good follower. I guess you have good qualities that make you a good leader now.
Thank you for writing your thoughts.
T. Aki~
I would like to be a leader.
>> CORRECT!
I actually moved to my job to be the leader.
>> I actually moved to a job to become a leader.
I had worked for the top company in the same field.
>> CORRECT!
Even though I chose current company for achieving my goal.
>>> Even though I chose my current company to achieve my goal.
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