To prepare the food easier.
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Yes, I think so.
>>Correct!
Developed cook machines help our life.
>>Developed cooking machines help us in our daily lives.
There are lots of machines in the kitchen.
>>Correct!
So we can cook in a hour.
>>Correct!
It cannot imagine in the past.
>>I cannot imagine what life was in the past.
If I wanted to cook in the past, I had to find the firewood first.
>>Correct!
But nowadays we need not to do.
>>But nowadays, we need not to do this.^^
In addition, we can save the food thanks to refrigerator.
>>In addition to these, we can save food as we store it in our refrigerator.
So we put out the food from refrigerator and then, we put that food in the microwave.
>>We just have to take the food out from the refrigerator and heat it in the microwave.
Finally, we can eat the food in 1 minute.
>>Correct!
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