To prepare the seminar
학생이 쓴 원문
Firstly, I decide topic which our members are interested in. This is important step to speaker to success seminar. Then, I search papers on internet browsers such as google. I put key word and check the found list. There is a lot of articles but I rarely find articles which have close correlation with my topic. I read some of them and collect information. After I have enough information about my topic from article, I constitute the structure of my adress and make document to enhance content understanding. I make summary page at final page to emphasize the importance of it. Following step if rehearsal. I hold a rehearsal on my own or with someone. If I have extra hours to prepare, I would discuss about topic with my collegue. it's effective to predict questions from audience.
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Hi Miss [이름]co thanks for writing! Here are your corrections:
Firstly, I decide topic which our members are interested in.
>>> First, I decided the topic which our members are interested in.
This is important step to speaker to success seminar.
>>> This is an important factor to the speaker for the success of the seminar.
Then, I search papers on internet browsers such as google. ---correct
>>> Then, I search papers over the internet as resource materials. --- better
I put key word and check the found list.
>>> I type the key word and check the results found list.
There is a lot of articles but I rarely find articles which have close correlation with my topic.
>>> There are a lot of articles but I rarely find those ones which have close correlation with my topic.
I read some of them and collect information.
>>> Correct
After I have enough information about my topic from article, I constitute the structure of my adress and make document to enhance content understanding.
>>> After I have enough information about my topic from article, I organize the structure of my address and make documents to enhance content understanding.
I make summary page at final page to emphasize the importance of it.
>>> I make a summary page at the final page to emphasize the important points.
Following step if rehearsal.
>>> The following step is rehearsal.
I hold a rehearsal on my own or with someone.
>>>Correct
If I have extra hours to prepare, I would discuss about topic with my collegue.
>>> If I have extra hours to prepare, I would discuss about the topic with my collegue.
it's effective to predict questions from audience.
>>> It's effective to predict questions from the audience.
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