To prevent bad things
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강사 첨삭
Hello sir,
Happy Monday!
Nobody could really avoid accidents that\'s why it\'s called an accident. But to prevent bad things from happening, maybe we could do this. Just like you said, we must be careful and think before we act. Nice sentences sir! See you later!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
No one can know the future.
>>correct!
People can only forecast the future.
>>correct!
Human being is imperfect and fallible.
>>correct!
And thus, the accident always takes place.
>>Thus, accidents always takes place.
The best way to prevent bad things is to take a time.
>>The best way to prevent bad things from happening is to take time.
It must be take a accident and bad things if you hurry.
>>Accidents and bad things happen when you hurry.
Always keep in mind, you have to take a time everything.
>>Always keep in mind, you have to take time in everything.
And be careful everytime, then you don\'t take a place accident or bad things.
>>And be careful every time then you won\'t encounter accidents or bad things.
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