To reduce traffic congestion..

Happy Friday. ^^

I totally agree with you.

It is really difficult to drive a car when there is traffic jam.

We need to be patient especially when we are driving.

Take care and good luck on your presentation today.
Teacher Nina

Traffic congestion is very big problem in city.

>> Traffic congestion is a very big problem in cities.
There are too many cars on the road so that makes a traffic congestion.

>> There are too many cars on the road so that makes traffic congestion.
To solve a traffic jam, we should change our notion about transfortation.

>> To solve traffic jam. we should change our notion about transportation.
We tend to think it is more convenient to use personal vechicle.

>> We tend to think that it is more convenient to use our personal vehicle.

>> OR: We tend to think that it is more convenient to our own vehicle.
However, the more people think like that, the more cars come on a road.

>> However, the more people think like that, more cars will be on the road.
Using a public trasfortation is best way to solve this problem.

>> Using public transportation is the best way to solve this problem.
In urban side, there ara three kinds of public transfortation.

>> In urban areas, there are there kinds of public transportation.
Bus, taxi and subway are substitution for personal car.

>> Bus, taxi and subway are the substitutes for personal car.
Pee of these are variable but you can choose one of these depand on your situation.

>> Did you mean: The fee of these vehicles are different but you can choose one depending on your situation.
Taxi is the fastest one but it is also the most expensive one and addtionally, it cause traffic jam too. so I don\'t recomend to use it oftenly.

>> Taxi is the fastest one but it is also the most expensive one. In addition, it causes traffic jam too so, I don\'t recommend you to use it often.
Bus is slower than taxi, but it has much more capability similiar with subway.

>> Bus is slower than the taxi, but it has more advantages similar to the subway. 
Seoul, capital of Korea, has wonderful public trasfortation system so It is easy to get wherever you want to go.

>> Seoul, the capital of Korea has a wonderful public transportation system. It is easy to go wherever you want to.