To. Ritchel

2012-09-21 · 첨삭 강사 Ritchel

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello~! Long(?) time no see! I miss your voice !! Nowadays, There is a festival in my university for several days. So I enjoyed festival in university. Some entertainmenter(such as talent) came to university, So we enjoyed the music and gag with them. I have to study.....But I think it's my last festival in university as students, so I enjoy now. I'll go out to play and enjoy with my friends now. So maybe I can't recieve your calling tommorow. T.T.. I think you will read essay before calling, so I write on this page, now. Sorry Ritchel. T.T See you monday~@.@

강사 첨삭

Hello there, [이름]! I miss you so much. I thought you forgot about me  already.  I was calling you awhile ago. Yes, I guess you\'re still enjoying the festival. Anyway, I\'m so sorry today was supposed to be our last class. I wish I can get the chance to talk with you again. If you still wish to have class with me, please try to call our Korean managers and tell them that you want to extend your class. Thank you so much for the fun and wonderful memories. Take care! I hope to talk to you again soon! Hello~!>>CORRECT! >>Hello! Long(?) time no see! >> Long time not see.I miss your voice !!>>CORRECT!Nowadays, There is a festival in my university for several days. >>There is a festival in my university for a couple of days.So I enjoyed festival in university.>>So I am enjoying the festival in my university. Some entertainmenter(such as talent) came to university, So we enjoyed the music and gag with them. >>Some entertainers came to our university ,so we enjoyed listening to music and laughing with them.I have to study.....But I think it\'s my last festival in university as students, so I enjoy now.>>I have to study, but I think this would be my last festival in the university as a student so I\'m enjoying it now.I\'ll go out to play and enjoy with my friends now. >>CORRECT! So maybe I can\'t recieve your calling tommorow. T.T.. >>So maybe I can\'t answer your call tomorrow.I think you will read essay before calling, so I write on this page, now. >>I think you will be reading this essay before calling so I\'m writing on this page now. Sorry Ritchel. T.T >>CORRECT!See you monday~@.@ >>CORRECT!

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