To Sally
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This is preparation for tomorrow lesson.
I had been to Ireland for two years. I was in a business college at the moment and there were some compulsory subjects. Especially, Research Project. It was hard stuff to me because everything in there. For example, I had to research lots of theory and had to have interview with business man who have business clients. I made lots of gestures during the interview because my english was not enough to do this subject unfortunately so it was my big challenge to me. Then I needed a crash course to do it batter than other classmates.
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A rainy Monday!^^
Your experience during the interview will make you stronger the next time you will do it again. J
This is preparation for tomorrow lesson.
>> This is a preparation for tomorrow’s lesson.I had been to Ireland for two years. I was in a business college at the moment and there were some compulsory subjects. Especially, Research Project.
>>I had been to Ireland for two years. I was in college at that time taking up business and there were some subjects to be taken compulsary especially research project.
It was hard stuff to me because everything in there.
>>It was hard stuff because everything is there.
For example, I had to research lots of theory and had to have interview with business man who have business clients.
>> For example, I had to research on lots of theories and had interviews with busines men who have business clients.
I made lots of gestures during the interview because my english was not enough to do this subject unfortunately so it was my big challenge to me.
>>I made a lot of gestures during the interview because unfortunatel my English was not good enough to do this subject. It was a big challenge to me.
Then I needed a crash course to do it batter than other classmates.
>>Then I needed a crash course to do better than my other classmates.
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