To Sally

When I was in Ireland they were in a recession at the moment. As a result, lots of people was unemployed because companies had to reduce thier expenditure. People have to have an austere life more than ever before and it can be occurred frequently that a company make creative accounting.

Hello Mr. [이름]! Good job in using the vocabulary I have given. You are a very good writer. Keep up the good work. Some advice is be acreful with the subject verb agreement. Make sure  that they are connected. I'll speak to you in class to hear how you deliver your answer. Have a good day! To Sally >>correct When I was in Ireland they were in a recession at the moment. >>When I was in Ireland they were in a recession.  As a result, lots of people was unemployed because companies had to reduce thier expenditure. >>As a result, lots of people were unemployed because companies had to reduce their expenditure. People have to have an austere life more than ever before and it can be occurred frequently that a company make creative accounting. >>People have to have an austere life more than ever before, it can frequently occurr that a company makes use of creative accounting.