To save the Earth

2021-10-12 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

In a broad sense, I don\'t think I am able to save the Earth. However, I can save it through my daily life, such as reducing driving, using less chemicals and the others. I think that second question is a little fun. I can\'t imagine that all humans will disappear from the Earth. Therefore, If all humans aren\'t exist, then there is definitely no the Earth.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] Ha!

Please take note of the suggestions below.

There are parts that you need to keep in mind.

They are usually used in daily conversation English.

You can ask your questions in class.

Thanks!^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

In a broad sense, I don\'t think I am able to save the Earth.

>> Correct
However, I can save it through my daily life, such as reducing driving, using less chemicals and the others.

>> However, I can save it in my daily life, such as reducing the instances when I go driving, using less chemicals and others.
I think that second question is a little fun.

>> I think that the second question is a little fun.
I can\'t imagine that all humans will disappear from the Earth.

>> Correct
Therefore, If all humans aren\'t exist, then there is definitely no the Earth.

>> Therefore, if all humans don\'t exist, then there is definitely no Earth.

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