To shanee...
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday Ma\'am Lisa!
How are you? I hope you enjoy your lunch.
Anyway, I want to thank you for always doing your best to express yourself.
Don\'t worry, I will always observe slow pacing.
If you have more suggestions, free to tell me. See you later Ma\'am.
~Teacher Shanee^^,
Now , I\'m in menopouse.
>>> I\'m in menopause.
So , i sometimes keep forgeting.
>>> So, I sometimes keep forgetting things.
>>> OR: That\'s why sometimes, I\'m forgetful.
Please ,You understand me.
>>> Please understand me.
I\'m going to go to the Laos with my cousin and her friends 2 people and me from December 17 to December 21.
>>> I\'m going to take a vacation in Laos with my cousin and her two friends from December 17 to December 21.
My cousin had some land.
>>> My cousin has some land.
The land was developed.
>>> Correct!
she received some money.
>>> She received some money.
By the way ,Suddenly, She suggested me to trip to the Laos.
>>> So suddenly, she suggested going on a trip to Laos to me.
I\'m a lucky woman. My cousin pays for everything.
>>> Correct!
i\'m going for free.
>>> I\'m going there for free.
Thank to SHANEE.
>>> Thank you Shanee.
IF I don\'t undfrstand, You speak slowly.
>>> If I don\'t understand something, please repeat it slowly.
I\'ll speak slowly and not in a hurry.
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