To shanee...

2018-12-07 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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Now , I'm in menopouse. So , i sometimes keep forgeting. Please ,You understand me. I'm going to go to the Laos with my cousin and her friends 2 people and me from December 17 to December 21. My cousin had some land. The land was developed. she received some money. By the way ,Suddenly, She suggested me to trip to the Laos. I'm a lucky woman.My cousin pays for everything . i'm going for free. Thank to SHANEE. IF I don't undfrstand, You speak slowly.I'll speak slowly and not in a hurry.

강사 첨삭

Happy Friday Ma\'am Lisa!

How are you? I hope you enjoy your lunch.

Anyway, I want to thank you for always doing your best to express yourself.

Don\'t worry, I will always observe slow pacing.

If you have more suggestions, free to tell me. See you later Ma\'am.

~Teacher Shanee^^,


Now , I\'m in menopouse.

>>> I\'m in menopause.

So , i sometimes keep forgeting.

>>> So, I sometimes keep forgetting things.

>>> OR: That\'s why sometimes, I\'m forgetful.

Please ,You understand me. 

>>> Please understand me.

I\'m going to go to the Laos with my cousin and her friends 2 people and me from December 17 to December 21. 

>>> I\'m going to take a vacation in Laos with my cousin and her two friends from December 17 to December 21.

My cousin had some land.

>>> My cousin has some land.

The land was developed.

>>> Correct!

she received some money.

>>> She received some money.

By the way ,Suddenly, She suggested me to trip to the Laos. 

>>> So suddenly, she suggested going on a trip to Laos to me.

I\'m a lucky woman. My cousin pays for everything.

>>> Correct!

i\'m going for free. 

>>> I\'m going there for free.

Thank to SHANEE.

>>> Thank you Shanee.

IF I don\'t undfrstand, You speak slowly.

>>> If I don\'t understand something, please repeat it slowly.

I\'ll speak slowly and not in a hurry.


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