To Shanee, a homework from 24th Oct.

Thank you so much for your opinions SUNNIE!

I enjoyed reading your composition.

See you tomorrow!
~Teacher Shanee^^,

Question: It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in the media. Do you agree that this is the cause of juvenile crime? What solutions can you offer to deal with this situation?

Answer: I think the culprit behind the juvenile crime is a social problem.

I think all the kids need to be thoughtfully educated by someone who they can trust.

>>> I think all the kids need to be thoughtfully educated by someone whom they can trust.

And I think their teachers and neighborhoods could lead them to the right way, letting them know what is right or wrong. But it is getting weaker than before.

Some teachers focus on their grade rather than telling them how to get well with their friends.

>>> Some teacher focus on encouraging them to improve their grades rather than teaching them how to get along well with their friends.

Some neighborhoods don\'t feel the need to give them advice.

>>> People in their surroundings [neighbors] don\'t feel the need to give them advice.

And some parents might think that they don\'t deserve to tell something to their kids.

But i think a kid is our kid.

>>> But I think we should be concerned for all kids out there.

We should carefully take care of them with patience because we are adults. So I think we don\'t have to hesitate to have a conservation with them.