To Shanee, Today's homework
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강사 첨삭
How are you Sunnie?
It\'s a beautiful day here, I hope it\'s the same there.
Anyway, thank you so much for doing your homework.
I appreciate you sharing your opinions. Continue practicing your writing, okay?
See you tomorrow!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
\"As a result of tourism, many historical buildings and sites are being damaged beyond repair. What could be done to prevent this?\"
My answer>
Capping the number of visitors would be a solution.
>>> Correct!
And closing the place for a few months could be good for restoring.
>>> Correct!
Take an example.
I\'ve been in Vatican last year with my family.
>>> Correct!
The instructor guided us to a small room in the cathedral.
>>> Correct!
It was \'Cappella Sistina\', the Sistina Chapel, very well known for the Sistina Chapel Ceiling.
>>> Correct!
By the way, the room was strictly controlled by some safety guards in Vatican.
>>> Correct!
They warned people not to speak loudly.
>>> Correct!
The place was supposed to be silent.
>>> Correct!
Maybe any sound or people\'s breath could damage the painting.
>>> Correct!
They also counted the number of people in the room.
>>> Correct!
They permitted next tourists to enter only after visitors finished their appreciation and left the room.
>>> They permitted other tourists to enter only after the ones inside were already done looking around and left the room.
It could appear little arrogant, but I think it is a proper way to protect its treasure which has been over a half century.
>>> It could be a little strict, but I think it is an effective way to protect its treasure which has been over a half millennium years old.
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