TO. sheela

2012-10-05 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

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hi . sheela~ Did you have a dinner? I’m little hugrly so , after I finish my homework , I will eat some foods~ anyway, the following is homework 1. Choose the correct sentence. B: His dog is running running around the neighborhood without its collar.(correct) -> I think that “without” is preposition , so noun should be used subsequent to “without” 2. Choose the correct sentence. A. We were going to do that anyway. (correct) -> it is difficult to me ,,,, I know that anyways is dialect in UK . but I don't convince..... 3. Choose the correct sentence. B: Marcus could have told us what he was planning. (correct) -> “of” can’t be located between could and told . 4. Choose the correct sentence. A: The students all took off their hats. (correct) -> it is too easy .. and the reason is such as problem 1 hu.... finally , I clear my HW ... see you tonight bye bye~!^^

강사 첨삭

Hello Charles, Thank you for explaining your answer. Actually, I haven\'t eaten my dinner yet. I am having some diet :). Here are my corrections and keep it up! See you later! T.Sheela hi . sheela~ >>Hi Sheela~Did you have a dinner? I’m little hugrly so , after I finish my homework , I will eat some foods~ >> Did you have your dinner? I am a little bit hungry so, after I finished my homework , I will eat some food.anyway, the following is homework >> Anyway, below is my homework.1. Choose the correct sentence. B: His dog is running running around the neighborhood without its collar.(correct) >>Correct!-> I think that “without” is preposition , so noun should be used subsequent to “without” >>I think that \"without\" is the preposition ,the noun should be used subsequent the preposition \"without.\"2. Choose the correct sentence. A. We were going to do that anyway. (correct)-> it is difficult to me ,,,, I know that anyways is dialect in UK . but I don\'t convince..... >>It is difficult for me. What I know is that this is a dialect in UK, but I am not convince.3. Choose the correct sentence. B: Marcus could have told us what he was planning. (correct)-> “of” can’t be located between could and told .>>The preposition \"of\" can be located between could and told.4. Choose the correct sentence. A: The students all took off their hats. (correct)-> it is too easy .. and the reason is such as problem 1>> It is too easy and the reason is the same as in problem number 1.hu.... finally , I clear my HW ... see you tonight bye bye~!^^ >> HU! I finally cleared my homework. See you tonight! Bye bye! >>OR: At last! I finally explained my homework. See you tonight! Bye!

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