To stay at home or go somewhere on holiday
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Most of people want to go somewhere on holiday. Is it for rest or for travel? Is rest and travel the same concept? I think people confuse the concept of rest and travel. The concept of rest needs relaxation of the body. But Travel needs activity of the body. Recharging one's batteries is as important as working hard. It can solve it to stay at home or go somewhere. It depends on the person. We usually appreciate a rest after hard work. The rest means just to relax and have a time without doing anything. It is called a healing. These days, it is also called 'space out'. It means not thinking about anything. I think sometimes people need to have the time. Some people have 'space out' time on holiday. The people really want to relax. But the people who want to travel somewhere on holiday need another recharge. They are satisfied to see a new things and stay on the beach. I used to travel rather than rest. But as getting old, I am getting harder to travel. Only my heart still want to go.
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Most of people want to go somewhere on holiday.
>> correct!
Is it for rest or for travel? Is rest and travel the same concept?
>> correct!
I think people confuse the concept of rest and travel.
>> correct!
The concept of rest needs relaxation of the body.
>> Rest means relaxing the body.
But Travel needs activity of the body.
>> But travel needs activity for the body.
Recharging one\'s batteries is as important as working hard.
>> correct!
It can solve it to stay at home or go somewhere.
>> You can solve it by staying at home or going somewhere.
It depends on the person. We usually appreciate a rest after hard work.
>> correct!
The rest means just to relax and have a time without doing anything.
>> Rest means just to relax and have a time for yourself without doing anything.
It is called a healing.
>> It is also called healing.
These days, it is also called \'space out\'.
>> These days, it is also called \'spacing out\'.
It means not thinking about anything.
>> correct!
I think sometimes people need to have the time.
>> I think sometimes people need to space out.
Some people have \'space out\' time on holiday.
>> Some people have \'space out\' time on a holiday.
These people really want to relax.
>> correct!
But the people who want to travel somewhere on holiday need another recharge.
>> But the people who want to travel somewhere on a holiday needs another thing/way to recharge.
They are satisfied to see a new things and stay on the beach.
>> They are satisfied to see new things or stay on the beach.
I used to travel rather than rest.
>> correct!
But as getting old, I am getting harder to travel. Only my heart still want to go.
>> But as I am getting old, it\'s getting harder for me to travel. Only my heart still wants to go.
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