to stay motivated for goals
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I think I\'m not the type of person who is good at setting goals and trying to stay motivated. When I was a student, I never set goals like what score I got or what rank I would achieve, but I kept studying hard every day because I thought studying was my \"business\" at that time. Another example, if I have a goal of losing weight, I don\'t set specific goal like how many kilos to lose.I just plan such as cutting down a cup of sugar coffee a day, night walking three times a week . Other things are similar to those, not setting goals but doing just things with making plans. I tend to set a main direction, plan activities and then check it out every day. By doing things this way, I can gain good habits, it piles up inside me, whether I reach the goals or not, I can build good habits as my assets for the future. And If I feel I need a very strong motivation for the goal, the goal isn\'t right for me, the goal for me comes to me naturally by my efforts before I feel need to stay motivated.
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Hi!
Well done! Thank you for sharing your answer and thoughts. They are clear, but I just needed to correct a few grammar points. ^^
~ Teacher Gina
I think I\'m not the type of person who is good at setting goals and trying to stay motivated.
>> CORRECT.
When I was a student, I never set goals like what score I got or what rank I would achieve, but I kept studying hard every day because I thought studying was my \"business\" at that time.
>> CORRECT
Another example, if I have a goal of losing weight, I don\'t set specific goal like how many kilos to lose.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: For example, if I have a goal of losing weight, I don’t set a specific target, like how many kilos to lose.
I just plan such as cutting down a cup of sugar coffee a day, night walking three times a week .
>> I just plan, such as cutting down to a cup of sugar/sweet coffee a day, and walking at night three times a week.
Other things are similar to those, not setting goals but doing just things with making plans.
>> Other things are similar to those- not setting any goals, but just doing things with plans.
I tend to set a main direction, plan activities and then check it out every day.
>> CORRECT.
By doing things this way, I can gain good habits, it piles up inside me, whether I reach the goals or not, I can build good habits as my assets for the future.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: By doing things this way, I build good habits that accumulate over time. Whether I reach my goals or not, these habits become my long-term assets.
And If I feel I need a very strong motivation for the goal, the goal isn\'t right for me, the goal for me comes to me naturally by my efforts before I feel need to stay motivated.
>> And if I feel I need very strong motivation for a goal, I think it may not be the right goal for me. The right goals come naturally through my efforts, before I even feel the need to stay motivated.
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