to study English

2018-08-13 · 첨삭 강사 Shelly

학생이 쓴 원문

During this summer vacations, I have vistied at my Alasca friend's house in America When I go to abord everytime, my husband goes together, but for the first time, I and two daughers go tirp without my husband in this summer vacations After this trips, I decided that I study English hard to communicate with forienger fluently. To study English, I started power english I want to study steadily

강사 첨삭

Good day, Sunny!

I know you will be able to improve your communication skill in English. Trust yourself, do your homework and always participate in our class.
I see that you are doing your best. See you on Friday

-Teacher Shelly-




During this summer vacations, I have vistied at my Alasca friend\'s house in America 
>>>This summer vacations, I have visted at my Alaska friend\'s house in America .

When I go to abord everytime, my husband goes together, but for the first time, I and two daughers go tirp without my husband in this summer vacations 
>>>I am always with my husband when I go abroad.
This summer I was only with my two daughters.

After this trips, I decided that I study English hard to communicate with forienger fluently. 
>>>After our trip, I have decided to study hard in English.
 I want to communicate with foreigners fluently.

To study English, I started power english
I want to study steadily
>>>I enrolled in Power English in order to improve my communication skill in English.

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