To T. Sheela
학생이 쓴 원문
I'm sorry to send you a sad message. I should delay our clsss to about December 20th. I really wanted my studying with you. But I was so pressured by the other things of my work. I really enjoyed our studying. You were an ingenious teacher, and always gave me a homework which was out from your big effort. I should point that I was not intrigued by anything from our studying. But there are many other things which make make me so busy. Although I said I was not busy at all, sometimes I came home 20 minutes before the class because of school work.
I hope to listen to your voice in December in which I finish my 2nd semester. But I know it could be possible or impossible depending on your schedule. I'll schedule my time to study with you.
Thank you for giving me lots of effort. I learned vision of life, speaking ability and most of all, got a friendly ear who always listened my life matters. I hope to see you again. Take care of your health. Bye~
강사 첨삭
My Dear [이름],
I feel so bad about this news but I always want the best for you. I know you\'ll be coming back and I will always wait for you. I hope you\'ll continue your studies and don\'t forget to have fun in life. You are a very dedicated and a hard working person, I know there will be a time that you\'ll be able to achieve your goals. Please don\'t forget to come back on December. See you soon!
T.Sheela
I\'m sorry to send you a sad message.
>> Correct!
I should delay our clsss to about December 20th.
>> I should delay our class until December 20th.
I really wanted my studying with you.
>>I really wanted to study with you.
But I was so pressured by the other things of my work.
>>But I am so pressured from my other works.
I really enjoyed our studying.
>> I relly enjoyed studying with you.
You were an ingenious teacher, and always gave me a homework which was out from your big effort.
>>You were an ingenious teacher and you always gave me a homework which was from your big effort.
I should point that I was not intrigued by anything from our studying.
>>I should point that I was not intrigued by anything from our study.
But there are many other things which make make me so busy.
>>Correct!
Although I said I was not busy at all, sometimes I came home 20 minutes before the class because of school work.
>>Although I have already said that I was not busy at all,but sometimes I come home 20 minutes late before the class because of school work. I hope to listen to your voice in December in which I finish my 2nd semester.
>>I hope to listen to your voice on December, in which I will be finishing my 2nd semester.
But I know it could be possible or impossible depending on your schedule.
>> Correct!
I\'ll schedule my time to study with you.
>>Correct!Thank you for giving me lots of effort.
>>Thank you for giving a lots of effort for me.
I learned vision of life, speaking ability and most of all, got a friendly ear who always listened my life matters.
>>I learned my vision in life,improved my speaking ability and most of all, got a friendly ear who always listened my life matters.
I hope to see you again.
>> Correct!
Take care of your health. Bye~
>>Correct!
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