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hello? my name is [이름]! I writing letter! I am very hungry because my mom is not home right now. She goes eating evening. My older beother is goes philippines! He come back home tomorrow!! Now i'm alone this writing. I will go to philippines to study So, I will perfect woman. But you understand this letter? I many mistake this ietter... because today is the first class. I writing my plan. anyway I like power english so power english help me. Okay? i will go to bed!! goodnight♥♥bye bye~~

Good evening again [이름]!! Thank you for writing this letter. It was really nice meeting you today. I am surprised to know that your brother is here in the Philippines. Anyway, I know you really want to improve so let\'s help each other. You have to study hard so that can achieve your goals! Please review the corrections I made below. See you tomorrow! ~ T. Giselle ^_^ ~~   hello? >> Hello!!  my name is [이름]!>> Correct! ^^ I writing letter!>> Here\'s a letter for you! >> OR: I wrote you a letter! I am very hungry because my mom is not home right now. >> Correct! ^^ She goes eating evening.>> She went out to have dinner this evening. My older beother is goes philippines! >> My older brother went to the Philippines! He come back home tomorrow!!>> He will come back home tomorrow!! Now i\'m alone this writing. >> Now I am writing this alone. I will go to philippines to study So, I will perfect woman. >> I will go to the Philippines to study so that I can become a perfect woman someday. But you understand this letter?>> But can you understand this letter? I many mistake this ietter... because today is the first class. >> I made many mistakes in this letter because today is our first class. I writing my plan.>> This is my plan. anyway I like power english so power english help me. Okay? >> Anyway, I like Power English so I hope Power English can help me. Is that okay? i will go to bed!! >> I will go to bed now!! goodnight♥♥bye bye~~ >> Correct! ^^ >>OR: Good night and good bye.