to.teacher
학생이 쓴 원문
Teacher!! We have class very fun! I don't along time(i don't write..) anyway!! I love you!! I have class that i well english >_< i feel so so today*-* but power english call time made me happy!! i want me to english well so i show my mom!! then my mom vwry shock!! i imagine very funny!! i don't write this letter.. i am worry anyway i hard stuy english. you show me!! is that okay? i will go to bed
★_★ teacher goodninght~~ bye see you monday@.@
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]!! >_<
Thank you for your composition today.
Please have a lot of writing practice. This will help you improve your sentences.
Always try to review the corrections I make for you.
Study hard [이름]!! ~ Fighting!! ^_^
See you next week!
Have a happy weekend!!
~ T. Giselle ^^ ~
Teacher!!
>> Correct! ^^
We have class very fun!
>> We had a fun class!
I don\'t along time(i don\'t write..) anyway!!
>> DID YOU MEAN: I don\'t have much time but I will write anyway.
I love you!!
>> Correct! ^^
I have class that i well english >_<
>> I have a class that will help me learn how to speak English well. >_<
i feel so so today*-*
>> Correct! ^^
but power english call time made me happy!!
>>
i want me to english well so i show my mom!!
>> I want my English skills to be better and I will show them to my mom!!
then my mom vwry shock!!
>> Then my mom will be shocked!!
i imagine very funny!!
>> I imagine it and it will be very funny!!
i don\'t write this letter.. i am worry
>> If I will not write this letter, I will be worried.
anyway i hard stuy english.
>> Anyway, I have to study English hard.
you show me!!
>> Please show me.
>> OR: Please help me study hard.
is that okay?
>> Correct! ^^
i will go to bed>> I will go to bed now.
★_★ teacher goodninght~~
>> Correct! ^^ (Please check your spelling: goodnight )
bye see you monday@.@
>> Bye! See you Monday @.@
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.