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2013-07-26 · 첨삭 강사 Giselle

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Teacher!! We have class very fun! I don't along time(i don't write..) anyway!! I love you!! I have class that i well english >_< i feel so so today*-* but power english call time made me happy!! i want me to english well so i show my mom!! then my mom vwry shock!! i imagine very funny!! i don't write this letter.. i am worry anyway i hard stuy english. you show me!! is that okay? i will go to bed ★_★ teacher goodninght~~ bye see you monday@.@

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]!! >_< Thank you for your composition today. Please have a lot of writing practice. This will help you improve your sentences. Always try to review the corrections I make for you. Study hard [이름]!! ~ Fighting!! ^_^ See you next week! Have a happy weekend!! ~ T. Giselle ^^ ~   Teacher!! >> Correct! ^^ We have class very fun! >> We had a fun class! I don\'t along time(i don\'t write..) anyway!! >> DID YOU MEAN: I don\'t have much time but I will write anyway.  I love you!! >> Correct! ^^ I have class that i well english >_< >> I have a class that will help me learn how to speak English well. >_< i feel so so today*-* >> Correct! ^^ but power english call time made me happy!! >> i want me to english well so i show my mom!! >> I want my English skills to be better and I will show them to my mom!! then my mom vwry shock!! >> Then my mom will be shocked!! i imagine very funny!! >> I imagine it and it will be very funny!! i don\'t write this letter.. i am worry >> If I will not write this letter, I will be worried. anyway i hard stuy english. >> Anyway, I have to study English hard. you show me!! >> Please show me. >> OR: Please help me study hard. is that okay? >> Correct! ^^ i will go to bed>> I will go to bed now. ★_★ teacher goodninght~~ >> Correct! ^^ (Please check your spelling: goodnight ) bye see you monday@.@ >> Bye! See you Monday @.@

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