to. teacher
학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning, teacher!
Last class we talked about favorite books
I said i like 'The diary of Anne Frank'
It is very popular and impressive book
You said it was kind like korea, yes maybe that's right
Democracy and dictatorship are two forms of government
Korea and Germany was dictatorship government
Anne overcome of suffering if i was in the same situation
I don't know i can last that long.
During the dictatorship government many jews people suffer from discrimination
they can't ride a car they even had to wear a yellow star badge
also Jews had to attend different schools
about the story of Anne's diary
her birthplace was Germany , but she move to Netherlands
but Netherlands was taken by Germany
they had to run from Germany so they decide to hide
everyday they had to be careful to not discover from others
but Anne's family and friend were find out
Anne passed away at the age of 15
It is very sad
I will stop from here :)
ps.teacher what is your favorite book?
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
I am very proud of you because you are knowledgeable.
Just keep on reading books.
Stay knowledgeable.
My favorite book is the \"Firm\" by John Grisham.
It is a novel book.
It is actually a legal thriller.
Anyway, enjoy the rest of your day.
~Teacher Chloe
Good morning, teacher!
>>Correct!Last class we talk about favorite books
>>In our last class, we talked about my favorite books. I said i like \'The diary of Anne Frank\'
>>I said it is \"The diary of Anne Frank\". It is very popular and impressive book
>>It is a very popular and an impressive book. You said it was kind like korea, yes maybe that\'s right
>>You said that it was like a Korean story. Maybe, that\'s right. Democracy and dictatorship are two forms of government>>Democracy and dictatorship are two the forms of government.
Korea and Germany was dictatorship government
>>Korea and Germany were dictatorship governments.Anne overcome of suffering if i was in the same situation I don\'t know i can last that long.>>Anne overcame a suffering. If I were in the same situation, I wouldn\'t know If I can last that long.
During the dictatorship government many jews people suffer from discrimination
>>During the dictatorship government many Jews suffered from discrimination.they can\'t ride a car they even had to wear a yellow star badge
>>They couldn\'t ride a car even when they wore a yellow star badge. also Jews had to attend different schools
>>Also, they had to attend different schools.about the story of Anne\'s diary
>>This is the story of Anne\'s diary. her birthplace was Germany , but she move to Netherlands
>>Her birthplace is in Germany the she moved to the Netherlands.but Netherlands was taken by Germany
>>But, the Netherlands was taken by Germany. they had to run from Germany so they decide to hide >>They had to run away from Germany and decided to hide.
everyday they had to be careful to not discover from others
>>Everyday, they had to be careful not to be discovered by others.but Anne\'s family and friend were find out
>>But, Anne\'s family and friends were found.Anne passed away at the age of 15
>>Anne passed away at the age of 15.It is very sad
>>It is very sad.
OR:>>It is a very sad story.I will stop from here :)
>>I will stop from here. ps.teacher what is your favorite book?
>>Teacher, what is your favorite book?
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