to. teacher~
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher
tomorrow it's first day of December
2016 is almost over
Now i am becomming 16years old
maybe i will meet my new friend, new teacher.
but actully i don't want to be older
i don't want to meet my new friend, and teacher
i just like my class
i think, i will miss my class so much
maybe i want to show my classroom to you
i have so great friends
anyway, i have final test on decemver.14th
but actully i can't focus on studying
i am really nervous.
it's really hard to focus on studying
when i open my textbook i am thinking about another things like
if i grown up what job that i will have
and when i become 16, what friend that i get along
maybe you can give me an advice
help me teacher:(
i am really sad on every class i said i feel happy but i think i am not that happy
thank you for reading about my stress
have a good day~
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
I guess, you\'re just overthinking.
You worry about the future.
Well, it\'s better to focus on your present.
Review or study well for your test or exam.
The rest will follow. I know you\'re a friendly person so a lot of people will like you.
But if some don\'t then just think that you cannot please everybody.
You just have to show how a good person you are.
You still have an ample time to think about what your future job is.
Don\'t think too much my dear. Go with the flow...
See you on Friday!
_Teacher Dianne
Hello, teacher
>> Hello, teacher!tomorrow it\'s first day of December 2016 is almost over
>> Tomorrow is the first day of December and 2016 is almost over.Now i am becomming 16years old
>> I\'m turning 16 this year.
>> Or: I will be 16 years old this year.
maybe i will meet my new friend, new teacher.
>> Maybe I will meet new friends and a new teacher.but actully i don\'t want to be older i don\'t want to meet my new friend, and teacher>> But actually, I don\'t want to be older. I don\'t want to meet new friends or a new teacher.
i just like my class
>> I just like to have my class now.i think, i will miss my class so much
>> I think, I will miss my class so much.maybe i want to show my classroom to you
>> I want to show you my classroom.i have so great friends
>> I have a great nimber of friends.anyway, i have final test on decemver.14th
>> Anyway, I have a final test on December 14th.but actully i can\'t focus on studying i am really nervous.
>> But I can\'t focus on studying and I am really nervous.it\'s really hard to focus on studying when i open my textbook i am thinking about another things like if i grown up what job that i will have and when i become 16, what friend that i get along>> It\'s really hard to focus on studying. When I open my textbook I am thinking about other things like if I will be a grown up what job will I have and when I turn 16 what kind of friends do I get along well with?maybe you can give me an advice>> Maybe you can give me an advice.
help me teacher:(
>> Help me teacher.i am really sad on every class i said i feel happy but i think i am not that happy
>> I am really sad in every class. I just say that I\'m happy, but in fact I\'m not.thank you for reading about my stress
>> Thank you for reading about my stress.have a good day~
>> Have a good day!
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