To teacher(about teakwondo)

2016-08-12 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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Good morning, teacher~ Today morning i went to teakwondo, i feel really healthful Do you want to hear about teakwondo? teakwondo is korea's traditional sport with out any weapon we fight using just hands and legs when we learn the teakwondo we can also take lesson about education of humanism for that reason, many parents prefer to teach teakwondo to their kids also when we do teakwondo we move body alot so, we can be flexible teakwondo is a solution of stress too, because we kick, jump and run Like i said we fight with out any weapons and we take parts in defense not attack it mean we belives peace and fairness teakwondo is also one of olympics event I am so proud that i am learning the teakwondo PS. what is the Philippines traditional sport? I don't know about the your traditional sprot but i heard that in your country play basketball alot is it right? Any way i will stop from here bye~

강사 첨삭

Yes, you are right! Basketball is our national sport. How did you know it? I am so proud of you, too. So, master taekwondo by heart. I want you to be a real player. Good luck! ~Teacher Chloe Good morning, teacher~ >>Good morning, teacher.Today morning i went to teakwondo, i feel really healthful >>I went to my taekwondo class this morning. I feel healthy. Do you want to hear about teakwondo? >>Do you want to know about taekwondo? teakwondo is korea\'s traditional sport >>It is Korea\'s national sport. with out any weapon we fight using just hands and legs >>We play it with different hands and legs techniques. when we learn the teakwondo we can also take lesson about education of humanism>>Learning it helps us to better understand characters. for that reason, many parents prefer to teach teakwondo to their kids >>For that reason, many parents want their kids to learn it. OR: >>For that reason, many parents want their children to learn it. also when we do teakwondo we move body alot so, we can be flexible >>We will be flexible because it makes us move a lot. teakwondo is a solution of stress too, because we kick, jump and run >>It is also one way to relieve stress because it is a kind of a exercise; we kick, jump, and run.Like i said we fight with out any weapons and we take parts in defense not attack >>We fight without any weapon. We take part in defense not in attack. it mean we belives peace and fairness >>It means that we promote peace and fairness. teakwondo is also one of olympics event >>Also, it is one of the games in the Olympics. I am so proud that i am learning the teakwondo>>I am so proud that I am learning it. PS. what is the Philippines traditional sport? >>What is Philippines\' national sport? I don\'t know about the your traditional sprot but i heard that in your country play basketball alot is it right? >>I don\'t know it but I heard that it is basketball. Am I right? Any way i will stop from here bye~ >>I will stop from here. Bye.

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