to. teacher camille
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there my dear [이름]!
Thank you so much for doing a great great job in our class!
You impressed me a lot!
And baby happy birthday! I am so sorry that I haven\'t read your composition today. I wasn\'t able to greet you on your special day...
Thank you so much and have a great day baby!
Enjoy your special day!
xoxo Teacher Cam^^
Hello, teacher camille
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Nice to meet you:)
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My name is [이름] and i am 16 years old now.
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I have one younger brother and parents.
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My brother don\'t listen to me and he is very mischievous boy
>>My brother doesn\'t listen to me and he is very mischievous.
I like to play piano i started piano when i was 7years old
>>I like to play the piano and I started playing the piano when I was 7 years old.
Today it\'s my birthday.
>>Today is my birthday.
I am really happy about it
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After our class i am going to play bowling with my family
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Also i am going to eat delicious food for dinner
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But i don\'t know what to eat! can you recommend for me?
>>But I don\'t know what to eat? Can you recommend me some?
Any way do you have favorite idol or k-pop boy band?
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My favorite idol is BTS i don\'t know that you know BTS
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But you have to know about them
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they are really handsome and cute
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I am really excite to meeting you
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about 10minute later, we will have a class
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now i have to go now bye~!:)
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