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2016-07-27 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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Hello teacher chloe! I am your student [이름] I've attending telephone class with Power English for third time with you but actually i like you so much I really enjoy to talk with you every day we have class for 10 minute I thought 10 minute is really longtime but it was really short mabye next month i have to apply 20minute When i first started this class i was afraid of caling on the phone but you advice me and help me I am not actully afraid of class i am enjoying class thanks to you have a nice day and see you soon on the telephone homework 1. The kids didn't study. therefore, they failed the course. 2. The weather was terrible.Therefore we decided to delay our trip. 3. You must buy the tickets; otherwise, we won't be able to see that play. 4. The neighborhood isn't very interesting. I like the house, moreover 5. We live in the same building; however, we hardly see each other.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]! It is my pleasure to be your teacher, dear. Me, too! I really enjoy talking with you. Don\'t be afraid because I am always here to help you. Just be confident enough, okay? You can do it! Yes, I will talk with you again later. Enjoy the rest of your day! ~Teacher Chloe Hello teacher chloe! >>Hello, teacher Chloe! I am your student [이름] >>I am your student, [이름]. I\'ve attending telephone class with Power English for third time with you>>I have been studying English with you at Power English since last Friday. but actually i like you so much >>Actually, I like you so much. I really enjoy to talk with you >>I really enjoy talking with you. every day we have class for 10 minute >>We have our class for 10 minutes from every weekday. I thought 10 minute is really longtime >>I thought 10 minutes is a long time. but it was really short >>But, it is really short. mabye next month i have to apply 20minute >>Maybe, I will extend our class for 20 minutes next month. When i first started this class i was afraid of caling on the phone >>When we first had our class, I was afraid to talk over the phone. but you advice me and help me >>But your advice helped me. I am not actully afraid of class i am enjoying class >>I am not afraid anymore. I am enjoying it.  thanks to you have a nice day >>Thanks to you. Have a nice day! and see you soon on the telephone>>I will talk to you again in our class later. homework1. The kids didn\'t study. therefore, they failed the course. >>Correct! OR:>>The kids didn\'t study. Therefore, they failed the course. (There should be a space after a period sign and always capitalize the first letter of the first word at the beginning of a sentence.)2. The weather was terrible.Therefore we decided to delay our trip. >>Correct! OR:>>The weather was terrible. Therefore, we decided to delay our trip. (There should be a space after a period sign) 3. You must buy the tickets; otherwise, we won\'t be able to see that play.>>Correct! 4. The neighborhood isn\'t very interesting. I like the house, moreover>>The neighborhood isn\'t very interesting. I like the house, though. 5. We live in the same building; however, we hardly see each other. >>Correct!

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