To teacher Lynn
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Lynn! I'm so sorry I couldn't be at a right time in today's class.. As I told you in last class, I went to my parents' restaurant at Monday, and I went back at yesterday night. I was so tired and forgot about the morning class ;-( Sorry again.. Actually I slept until the twelve'o clock!
I checked on your feedback today, and the homework was about telling the supernatural things that I believe. To be honest, I don't believe any supernatural things like ghost, fortune teller or anythings. I'm a christian as you know, so I only beileve in God and the angels. I also read that evils exist in the world at a bible, but I'm not afraid of them. Because I think God always taking care of us from them.
I want to say sorry about today's class and see you on Friday! bye!
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
It\'s okay, I understand. I was just a bit worried yesterday because I know you as a responsible lady. You always inform me or give an advance notice if you can\'t make it in class. Nothing serious happened so I\'m happy. See you tomorrow!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
Hello Lynn! I\'m so sorry I couldn\'t be at a right time in today\'s class..
>> Hello Lynn! I\'m so sorry I couldn\'t be on time in today\'s class..
As I told you in last class, I went to my parents\' restaurant at Monday, and I went back at yesterday night.
>> As I told you on our last class, I went to my parents\' restaurant on Monday, and I came back home yesterday night.
OR>> As I told you last Monday, I went to my parents\' restaurant on Monday, and I came back home yesterday night. I was so tired and forgot about the morning class ;-( Sorry again.. Actually I slept until the twelve\'o clock!
>> I was so tired and so I forgot about the morning class ;-( Sorry again.. Actually I slept until twelve clock!
I checked on your feedback today, and the homework was about telling the supernatural things that I believe.
>> I checked your feedback today, and the homework was about telling the supernatural things that I believe.
To be honest, I don\'t believe any supernatural things like ghost, fortune teller or anythings.
>> To be honest, I don\'t believe in any supernatural things like ghosts, fortune tellers or such things.
I\'m a Christian as you know, so I only believe in God and the angels.
>> correct!
I also read that evils exist in the world at a bible, but I\'m not afraid of them.
>> I also read from the Bible that evils exist in the world but I\'m not afraid of them.
Because I think God always taking care of us from them.
>> Because I think God is always taking care of us from them.
OR>> Because God can protect us from them.
I want to say sorry about today\'s class and see you on Friday! Bye!
>> correct!
It\'s okay, I understand. I was just a bit worried yesterday because I know you as a responsible lady. You always inform me or give an advance notice if you can\'t make it in class. Nothing serious happened so I\'m happy. See you tomorrow!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
Hello Lynn! I\'m so sorry I couldn\'t be at a right time in today\'s class..
>> Hello Lynn! I\'m so sorry I couldn\'t be on time in today\'s class..
As I told you in last class, I went to my parents\' restaurant at Monday, and I went back at yesterday night.
>> As I told you on our last class, I went to my parents\' restaurant on Monday, and I came back home yesterday night.
OR>> As I told you last Monday, I went to my parents\' restaurant on Monday, and I came back home yesterday night. I was so tired and forgot about the morning class ;-( Sorry again.. Actually I slept until the twelve\'o clock!
>> I was so tired and so I forgot about the morning class ;-( Sorry again.. Actually I slept until twelve clock!
I checked on your feedback today, and the homework was about telling the supernatural things that I believe.
>> I checked your feedback today, and the homework was about telling the supernatural things that I believe.
To be honest, I don\'t believe any supernatural things like ghost, fortune teller or anythings.
>> To be honest, I don\'t believe in any supernatural things like ghosts, fortune tellers or such things.
I\'m a Christian as you know, so I only believe in God and the angels.
>> correct!
I also read that evils exist in the world at a bible, but I\'m not afraid of them.
>> I also read from the Bible that evils exist in the world but I\'m not afraid of them.
Because I think God always taking care of us from them.
>> Because I think God is always taking care of us from them.
OR>> Because God can protect us from them.
I want to say sorry about today\'s class and see you on Friday! Bye!
>> correct!
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