To. Tiny (12/28)
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, Tiny
I am [이름].
I am so sorry to cancel today class.
My boyfriend had a car accident last night.
So I am going to see him.
His car was broken partial, but it’s okay!
He didn’t injury so much.
I forgot to inform you about New-year vacation schedule.
Vacation is 22th~24th.
Very short time…
Anyway, Talk tomorrow than.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
I am glad to hear that there isn\'t anything serious that had happen to your boyfriend. I hope everything about the damage of his car will be settled as soon as possible. I will talk to you again tomorrow. Take care!
-T. Tiny^0^
Hi, Tiny
>>Hi Tiny,I am [이름].
>>CORRECT
>>(or) This is [이름].I am so sorry to cancel today class.
>> I am so sorry to cancel today\'s class.
My boyfriend had a car accident last night.
>>CORRECTSo I am going to see him.
>>CORRECTHis car was broken partial, but it’s okay!
>> His car was broken partially, but it\'s okay!
He didn’t injury so much.
>> He didn\'t have injury so much.
>> (or) He wasn\'t injured badly.
I forgot to inform you about New-year vacation schedule.
>> I forgot to inform you about the Lunar New Year vacation schedule.Vacation is 22th~24th.
>>The vacation is from 22th~24th.
Very short time…
>>It\'s a very short time.Anyway, Talk tomorrow than.
>>SPELLING CHECK: then
>> Anyway, we\'ll talk tomorrow then.
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