To. Tiny (12/28)

2011-12-29 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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Hi, Tiny I am [이름]. I am so sorry to cancel today class. My boyfriend had a car accident last night. So I am going to see him. His car was broken partial, but it’s okay! He didn’t injury so much. I forgot to inform you about New-year vacation schedule. Vacation is 22th~24th. Very short time… Anyway, Talk tomorrow than.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], I am glad to hear that there isn\'t anything serious that had happen to your boyfriend. I hope everything about the damage of his car will be settled as soon as possible. I will talk to you again tomorrow. Take care! -T. Tiny^0^ Hi, Tiny >>Hi Tiny,I am [이름]. >>CORRECT >>(or) This is [이름].I am so sorry to cancel today class. >> I am so sorry to cancel today\'s class. My boyfriend had a car accident last night. >>CORRECTSo I am going to see him. >>CORRECTHis car was broken partial, but it’s okay! >> His car was broken partially, but it\'s okay! He didn’t injury so much. >> He didn\'t have injury so much. >> (or) He wasn\'t injured badly. I forgot to inform you about New-year vacation schedule. >> I forgot to inform you about the Lunar New Year vacation schedule.Vacation is 22th~24th. >>The vacation is from 22th~24th. Very short time… >>It\'s a very short time.Anyway, Talk tomorrow than. >>SPELLING CHECK: then >> Anyway, we\'ll talk tomorrow then.

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