To. Tiny
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, I am [이름].
I will extend our English class as soon as possible.
Now I am thinking about my job seriously.
So, after a lot of thinking.. I will go on our class.
Please wait for me ^^
Take care Tiny !
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for extending our class.
I hope you make the best decision about your job.
I am always waiting for you don\'t worry! Kk^^
God bless you always!
-Tiny^0^-
Hi, I am [이름].>>correctI will extend our English class as soon as possible.>>correctNow I am thinking about my job seriously.>>correctSo, after a lot of thinking.. I will go on our class.>>(or) So, after a lot of thinking?I will go on with our class.Please wait for me ^^>>correctTake care Tiny !
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