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Hello Everyone! First of all I would like to say, Thank you for giving me the chance to introduce myself to you. I am glad to be here today. My name is [Name] HWANG I am a senior student at Hankyung university and my major is Horticulture. The reason I am here is that I would like to help you as your senior by sharing my tips to you. In fact, Through this chance I might also get confidence. I have a question first, Do you have a dream? or Are you satisfied with your current major? For me, the most important thing in life is to have a dream. Only a human being can dream among all living things so just find what you really want through a lot of experience.

Hi [이름]! Thanks for sending me the speech right away.^^ I will send it as soon as possible.^^ I will check not only grammar but also the composition.^^ Good night!   Hello Everyone! First of all I would like to say, Thank you for giving me the chance to introduce myself to you. >> Hello everyone! First of all I would like to say, thank you for giving me the chance to introduce myself to you. (Capitalization) I am glad to be here today. My name is [Name] HWANG >> I am glad to be here today. My name is [Name] HWANG. (Punctuation) I am a senior student at Hankyung university and my major is Horticulture. >> CORRECT The reason I am here is that I would like to help you as your senior by sharing my tips to you. >> CORRECT In fact, Through this chance I might also get confidence. >> In fact, through this chance, I might also get confidence. (Capitalization) I have a question first, Do you have a dream? or Are you satisfied with your current major? >> I have a question first, do you have a dream? Or are you satisfied with your current major? (Capitalization) For me, the most important thing in life is to have a dream. Only a human being can dream among all living things so just find what you really want through a lot of experience. >> CORRECT