To what extent are electric vehicles a solution to global pollution?
학생이 쓴 원문
To use electric vehicles is one of the solution to reduce global pollution. There are many ways which people can do to keep the earth.
The key method is reducing the consumption of all energy such as oil, electricity, water and so on. The electricity is produced with fuel consumption that can be the source of pollution. Encourage people to use a public transportation rather than use their own car. As I know, The car manufacturer in the world have tried to invent a alternative fuel like electric cars, Hydrogen and gas vehicles. Although, this kind of efforts, the main points to solve global pollution is not to use private vehicles. The easy way people can do to keep our earth is do recycling, reduce the use of disposable products. Korea has been suffering from micro dust problem and we still don\'t know the exact solution. I think we have to think over how to reduce the consumption of all kind energies.
강사 첨삭
Thank you Sir [이름]~! ^^ Keep it up~!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
To use electric vehicles is one of the solutions to reduce global pollution.
>>> CORRECT
There are many ways which people can do to keep the earth.
>>> CORRECT
The key method is reducing the consumption of all energy such as oil, electricity, water and so on.
The key method is reducing the consumption of all energy such as oil, electricity, water and so on.
>>> CORRECT
The electricity is produced with fuel consumption that can be the source of pollution.
>>> CORRECT
Encourage people to use a public transportation rather than use their own car.
>>> CORRECT
As I know, the car manufacturer in the world have tried to invent an alternative fuel like electric cars, hydrogen and gas vehicles.
>>> CORRECT
Although, this kind of efforts, the main points to solve global pollution is not to use private vehicles.
>>> CORRECT
The easy way people can do to keep our earth is do recycling, reduce the use of disposable products.
>>> CORRECT
Korea has been suffering from micro dust problem and we still don\'t know the exact solution.
>>> CORRECT
I think we have to think over how to reduce the consumption of all kind energies.
>>> CORRECT
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.