To what extent do you enjoy shopping? Please explain.
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To what extent do you enjoy shopping? Please explain.
Honestly, I can not stand to stay in the shopping malls for a long time.
>>Honestly, I cannot stand staying in the shopping malls for a long time.
I used to love buying my clothes, but I don\'t enjoy going shopping anymore.
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or>>I used to derive pleasure in purchasing my own clothes, but these days, I no longer find it fun when shopping.
Because I don\'t have attractive body to wear beautiful clothes, don\'t try to keep up with all the new trends and don\'t know when old ones are going out of styles.
>>Because I don\'t have an attractive body to be able to wear beautiful clothes. So I don\'t try to keep up with all the new trends and I don\'t know if the old ones have gone out of style.
I am quite old to keep up with new trends that\'s why I don\'t like going shopping since I was 30 years old.
>>I am quite old to keep up with the new trends, that\'s why I don\'t like going shopping since I turned 30 years old.
I wife also has had same problem as I had.
>>My wife also has had the same problem like I did.
however, the main reason why she would n\'t go shopping is different.
>>However, the main reason why she stopped shopping was different.
She would like to save money by reducing the cost of shopping and then she wants to use this money for our kids.
>>She wanted to save money by reducing the frequency of her shopping trips, so she can use the money for our kids instead.
She used to love purchasing clothes, shoes and bags before she got married.
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or>>She once had fun in shopping for clothes, shoes and bags when she was still single.
My wife and I still want to go shopping, if time and money is available.
>>My wife and I still want to go shopping, if we have time and money.
I think that being adults is sad, because we should give up a lot of thing for kids and our parents.
>>I think that being adults is sad, because we should give up a lot of things for our kids and parents.
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