To what extent does our choice of clothing reflect our true personality, and so what extent is it a
학생이 쓴 원문
Clothes show who we are while also hiding our secrets. We use outfits to express our feelings or as armor to fit in. What we wear is a mix of our true selves and the image we want others to see.
강사 첨삭
Hi Seo,
I\'m so happy to meet you. You wrote a very thoughtful and meaningful response. I especially like your idea that clothes can both \"show who we are and hide parts of us\". That’s a very deep perspective. Your use of phrases like \"express our feelings” and “armor to fit in” is also very creative and natural.
You did a great job explaining that clothing reflects both our true personality and the image we want to present to others. That’s a strong and balanced answer. Well done!
~Teacher Cathy
Clothes show who we are while also hiding our secrets.
>> CORRECT
OR>>Clothes show who we are while also hiding parts of ourselves.
We use outfits to express our feelings or as armor to fit in.
>> CORRECT
OR>>We wear outfits to convey our emotions or as a form of armor to blend in.
What we wear is a mix of our true selves and the image we want others to see.
>> CORRECT
OR>>Our clothing reflects both who we truly are and the image we wish to project to others.
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