To what time do you want to go if you could time travel
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If I could time travel, I would go to the future. In the future, the science must be developed more so amazing technologies would be a common thing. Think of the world 20 years before and now. In 1999, nobody would be able to imagine of smart phones, WiFi, and electric mobile vehicles. Now in 2019, those things are very common. Likewise, technologies that I don’t even think to be realized would be common 50 years later. I just want to know and experience them.
There are numbers of technologies that I am interested in, mostly, I want to see how fast we can travel in the space. Will people can travel in the speed of light? How far can people travel in the space? Secondly, I want to see if a human brain can be connected to a computer. Even now, connecting neurons to electric devices like computer is under researching. People would see and feel when some signals were input. Maybe new game would be developed using this technology. You may feel and act as a character in the game.
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As always, you never cease to amaze me. :) Very cool answer.
>> Correct.
In the future, the science must be developed more so amazing technologies would be a common thing.
>> In the future, Science must be even more developed. It might be so amazing that new technologies would be a common thing.
Think of the world 20 years before and now.
>> Think of the world 20 years ago and now.
In 1999, nobody would be able to imagine of smart phones, WiFi, and electric mobile vehicles.
>> In 1999, nobody would have imagined about smart phones, WiFi, and electric mobile vehicles.
Now in 2019, those things are very common.
>> Correct.
Likewise, technologies that I don’t even think to be realized would be common 50 years later.
>> Likewise, technologies that I don’t even think of would be common 50 years from now.
I just want to know and experience them.
>> Correct.
There are numbers of technologies that I am interested in, mostly, I want to see how fast we can travel in the space.
>> There are numbers of technologies that I am interested in. Mostly, I want to see how fast we can travel in space.
Will people can travel in the speed of light?
>> Will people travel in the speed of light?
How far can people travel in the space? Secondly, I want to see if a human brain can be connected to a computer.
>> How far can people travel in pace? Secondly, I want to see if a human brain can be connected to a computer. ( THIS IS TOTALLY AMAZING ANS BIZARRE AT THE SAME TIME THOUGH)
Even now, connecting neurons to electric devices like computer is under researching.
>> Even to this day, connecting neurons to electric devices like computers is already under research.
People would see and feel when some signals were input.
>> People would see and feel when some signals were inputted.
Maybe new game would be developed using this technology.
>> Maybe new games would be developed using this technology.
You may feel and act as a character in the game.
>> Correct.
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