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I met a new partner tuesday this week. Theirs CEO was a senior of my CEO. The meeting was very successful.
My CEO was satisfied.My boss was in the meeting. My boss was a my fri7end and was a my ceo\'s friend.
The meeting was finished at 1 pm.
My friend told we went to drink .
My CEO said OK.
We started to drink 2pm and finished 7 pm.
I am going to my wife\'s mother house. She is special birthday today.
There are several special birthday in korea.
The one is a first birthday and is 60\'s and 70\'s and 80\'s.
She is 70\'s birthday. so we are going to special food restrant.
The restrant has a good food, view and service but is a very expensive. I will give her gift.
The gift is money. I want to buy special something , cloth, jewel etc. but my wife told money was best.
70\'s birthday is just one time and very special. so there are to plan usually big party. but nowaday we meet just family because of corona.
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Hello Sir John. Thank you for this.
- T. Beth
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I met a new partner tuesday this week. >>>> I met a new partner Tuesday this week.
Theirs CEO was a senior of my CEO.
>>>> Their CEO was a senior of my CEO.
The meeting was very successful.
>>>> correct.
My CEO was satisfied.
My CEO was satisfied.
>>>> correct
My boss was in the meeting.
>>>> correct
My boss was a my fri7end and was a my ceo\'s friend.
>>>> My boss was my friend and also my CEO\'s friend.
The meeting was finished at 1 pm.
The meeting was finished at 1 pm.
>>>> correct
My friend told we went to drink .
My friend told we went to drink .
>>>> My friend told me we should go for a drink.
My CEO said OK.
>>>> OR: My CEO agreed to it.
We started to drink 2pm and finished 7 pm.
We started to drink 2pm and finished 7 pm.
>>>> We started to drink at 2pm and finished at 7pm.
I am going to my wife\'s mother house.
>>>> correct
She is special birthday today.
>>>> She will be having her special birthday today.
There are several special birthday in korea.
There are several special birthday in korea.
>>>> There are several special birthdays in Korea.
The one is a first birthday and is 60\'s and 70\'s and 80\'s.
>>>> One is the first birthday and the 60th, the 70th and the 8th birthday.
She is 70\'s birthday. so we are going to special food restrant.
>>>> Today is her 70th birthday, so we are going to a special food restaurant.
The restrant has a good food, view and service but is a very expensive.
The restrant has a good food, view and service but is a very expensive.
>>>> The restaurant has good food, view and service but is very expensive.
I will give her gift.
>>>> I will give her a gift.
The gift is money.
The gift is money.
>>>> correct.
I want to buy special something , cloth, jewel etc. but my wife told money was best.
>>>> I wanted to buy something special like clothes, jewelries, etc. but my wife told me money would be the best.
70\'s birthday is just one time and very special. so there are to plan usually big party.
70\'s birthday is just one time and very special. so there are to plan usually big party.
>>>> A 70th birthday happens just once and is very special so they usually plan a big party.
but nowaday we meet just family because of corona.
>>>> But nowadays, we just meet as a family because of corona virus.
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