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2023-04-17 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

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Today I decided to have a pajama party with my friends. But I don\'t have pretty pajama I decorated the menu with what I want to eat and what my friends want to eat. I made the menu while working. Making the menu was really fun. we going to drink while watching a scary movie with the lights off I decided to eat a highball. teacher know the highball? It is a weak liquor made by mixing whiskey with soda lemon. I drank it often when I went to the Philippines. It tastes really good when mixed with a fruit drink.

강사 첨삭

Hi Tia,

You did a good job on this homework. I can see that you\'re really working hard today. I\'m so proud of you. Keep up the good work!

PS

Yes, Tia, I know highballs and I also like them because they are so simple mixed drinks that are easy to make and it\'s so refreshing. ^^

~Teacher Cathy

 

Today I decided to have a pajama party with my friends.

>>CORRECT
But I don\'t have pretty pajama

>>But I don\'t have pretty pajamas.
I decorated the menu with what I want to eat and what my friends want to eat.

>>I decorated the menu with what my friends and I wanted to eat.
I made the menu while working.

>>CORRECT
Making the menu was really fun.

>>CORRECT
we going to drink while watching a scary movie with the lights off

>>We going to drink while watching a scary movie with the lights off.
I decided to eat a highball.

>>I decided to drink a highball.

teacher know the highball?

>>Teacher, do you know a highball?

It is a weak liquor made by mixing whiskey with soda lemon.

>>CORRECT

I drank it often when I went to the Philippines.

>> CORRECT
It tastes really good when mixed with a fruit drink.

>> CORRECT

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