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강사 첨삭
Hi Tia,
You did a good job on this homework. I can see that you\'re really working hard today. I\'m so proud of you. Keep up the good work!
PS
Yes, Tia, I know highballs and I also like them because they are so simple mixed drinks that are easy to make and it\'s so refreshing. ^^
~Teacher Cathy
Today I decided to have a pajama party with my friends.
>>CORRECT
But I don\'t have pretty pajama
>>But I don\'t have pretty
pajamas.
I decorated the menu with what I want to eat and
what my friends want to eat.
>>I decorated the menu with
what my friends and I wanted to eat.
I made the menu while working.
>>CORRECT
Making the menu was really fun.
>>CORRECT
we going to drink while watching a scary movie
with the lights off
>>We going to drink while
watching a scary movie with the lights off.
I decided to eat a highball.
>>I decided to drink a highball.
teacher know the highball?
>>Teacher, do you know a highball?
It is a weak liquor made by mixing whiskey with soda lemon.
>>CORRECT
I drank it often when I went to the Philippines.
>> CORRECT
It tastes really good when mixed with a fruit
drink.
>> CORRECT
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