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2012-07-31 · 첨삭 강사 Michelle

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Today I was very busy that I have to do my homework for academy. Also I was so tired because I watched the Olympic games for Korea. The games held in 2 AM so I can't wake up on time. But I feel nice when our team won the medals. After doing homework I should go to academy and come back home at 8 PM. Next time I should do my homework earier.

강사 첨삭

Hi Nicolas, I am so glad you are putting your thoughts into writting. Keep it up! There are moments I wish too I did things earlier.  Watching the Olympics is really exciting. I am glad for your country winning medals. You could really express yourself well. I like how you organize your sentences to express yourself. Keep up communicating in English! T. Michelle (^^) Today I was very busy that I have to do my homework for academy. >>> Today I was very busy and that I have to do my homework for academy. Also I was so tired because I watched the Olympic games for Korea. >>>Correct The games held in 2 AM so I can\'t wake up on time. >>> The games was held at 2 a.m. so I can\'t wake up on time. But I feel nice when our team won the medals. >>> Correct After doing homework I should go to academy and come back home at 8 PM. >>> After doing homework, I should go to academy and come back home at 8 p.m. Next time I should do my homework earier. >> Correct

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