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Which Korean food do you want to recommend to foreigner?
I will recommend Bulgogi. Bulgogi is made of beef or pork with vegetable and souse. We eat together some side dish and rice with Bulgogi. In my travel I met some foreigners who already been in Korea. They said to me Bulgogi was the best food in Korea. Even they missed Bulgogi. Most of Korean foods are very hot. So sometime it might be hard to eat especially for foreigners. But Bulgogi with soya souse is not hot even we can cook little sweety. It is easy to eat and very delicious and everyone likes that. So I think if I recommend Bulgogi that will be a good choice for them.
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Good morning [이름] Na!
It is such a chilly Monday morning again and I think this day will be good.
Food has always been a very influential factor why foreigners visit other countries.
Of course aside from cultures and traditions.
I agree with you that Bulgogi is really one of the best food in your country because I myself have tasted it.
Anyways, going back to your composition.
Your did very good explaining and answering the question.
Just be very mindful of your sentences.
Sometimes they are lacking supporting words that helps complete the idea of your sentences.
All over, a job well done.
Have a good one.
See you later....
Always,
~Aimee^^
>> Which Korean food would you recommend to a froeigner?
I will recommend Bulgogi.
I will recommend Bulgogi.
>> Correct
>> The Korean food which I will recommend to a foreigner would be Bulgogi.
Bulgogi is made of beef or pork with vegetable and souse.
>> Bulgogi is made up of beef or pork with vegetables and sauce.
We eat together some side dish and rice with Bulgogi.
>> We eat this together with some side dishes and rice.
In my travel I met some foreigners who already been in Korea.
>> During my travel, I met some foreigners who have already been to Korea.
>> When I was traveling, I met some foreigners who have already visited Korea.
They said to me Bulgogi was the best food in Korea.
>> They told me that Bulgogi is the best food in Korea.
>> They said that Bulgogi is the best food in Korea.
Even they missed Bulgogi.
>> They even miss eating Bulgogi.
Most of Korean foods are very hot.
>> Most Korean foods are very hot.
So sometime it might be hard to eat especially for foreigners.
>> Correct
But Bulgogi with soya souse is not hot even we can cook little sweety.
>> But Bulgogi with soy sauce is not hot, some would even cook Bulgogi a little [이름] sweet.
It is easy to eat and very delicious and everyone likes that.
>> It is easy to eat and very delicious. That is why most people like it.
So I think if I recommend Bulgogi that will be a good choice for them.
>> So, I think that recommending Bulgogi to foreigners will be a good choice
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